Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
It is often believed that serious social
problems
can occur as much as practical problems
when we live in foreign countries
where we should use foreign languages. And I completely disagree with this
argument.
First of all, there are many amount practical problems
than social problems
. We should get a job to keep our living in foreign countries
. However
, if we did not have good pronunciation
as well as
the people
who were born there, and people
did not understand well our pronunciation
, we could not keep our jobs much longer. For example
, the way to pronounce terms of medical in South Korean
is really different compared with the pronunciation
in America, so in the case Korean
doctors
work in America, many American doctors
cannot understand what exactly Korean
doctors
say and this
difference will make both countries
’ doctors
harder in working, especially Korean
doctors
are much harder.
Secondly
, everybody who lives in foreign countries
can experience a racial distribution. Because of the different colour of skin, some people
still hate and ignore other people
from foreign nations and this
can be followed by the hardness in getting jobs or receiving fewer salaries than usual citizens. For instance
, I saw the video content of the Orient travellers who visited countries
in Europe and some restaurants’ staff in Europe ignored that visitors came from Orient countries
and did not receive their orders.
In conclusion, still
many practical Add a comma
,still
problems
can cause more than serious social problems
because of the foreigners’ pronunciation
and racism. In my case, I fully disagree with this
statement because of the large difference in the amount of problems
between social and practical problems
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