restaurant has advertised in a newspaper that a waiter/waitress is required for evening work. It has also been mentioned that the prospective candidate should have some experience. Write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear Mr.Moore, I am Roy. I am writing

this

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letter in

regards

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to the advertisement published on 4th July 2023 about the vacancy for

waiter

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a waiter

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at your hotel. I would like to apply for

this

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post as I believe my experience and qualities match your needs.

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with I have my educational qualifications done in Hotel Management course from an esteemed university in Edmonton. During my previous

job

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I was responsible for taking orders and making sure the right food

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being served at the right table.

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to that, I believe I am excellent

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handling customers and dealing with their grievances. I always made sure no customer

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dissatisfied with the quality of food being served.

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,I would like to use my skills and knowledge to their best capacity and avail

this

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opportunity to work as a waiter for your

high end

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hotel. I assure you

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that I am

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punctual

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and

hard working

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employee. Looking forward

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a positive response from you. Yours sincerely, Roy.

yusra.f.jaffer

Aug 31, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

169 words

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