The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates information about the amount of
pineapple
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in metric
tonnes
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sold to foreign countries around the world by leading exporters in
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field,
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the pie chart shows the details of the various costs associated with each
pineapple
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consumed in 2019.
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,
it is clear that
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the
country
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that delivered the highest amount of pineapples to other countries was B in 2009,
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the number of pineapples exported by
country
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A reached its peak in 2019. The costs for distribution and retail constituted the highest proportion of each consumed
pineapple
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. In 2009, the number of pineapples sold to other countries by
country
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B accounted for the highest figure, around 5 million metric
tonnes
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, in stark contrast to
country
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C, which was nearly
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0 metric
tonnes
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. A decade later, the
country
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overtook B to lead in
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sector with the figure reaching a peak of above 10 million metric
tonnes
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,
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country
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C maintained its level at just approximately 1 million metric
tonnes
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. The vast majority of the cost for each
pineapple
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was attributed to distribution and retail, making up the largest percentage at about 35%, nearly double that of the profit. Following that, the figures for export costs and international transport were 16% and 12%, respectively.
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, the expenses for production and taxes accounted for the lowest proportion, with the figure standing below 5%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, tonnes, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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