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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
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The given line graph illustrates the data about
bananas
 cost in four different countries
such
 as
Japan
, France, Germany and
USA
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the USA
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. The graph shows information in
decade
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the decade
a decade
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 from 1994 to 2004.
According to
graphic
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the graphic
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 presentation, the
price
 of
bananas
 is not stable and varies in every country and year.
However
, the highest
price
 per kilogram was in 1998 in
Japan
 and cost 3 dollars,
while
 the lowest
price
 was in
USA
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the USA
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 and levelled
of
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off
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 at 1 dollar in 1997. It can be seen that in France and
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the USA
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USA
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,USA
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 the
price
for
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of
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bananas
 remained stable.
However
 in France in 1999 we can observe a drop from $2 to $1.5, after
that
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,that
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 it climbed to
usuas
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usual
 $2 per
killogram
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kilogram
.
Furthermore
, approximately in
1998
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,1998
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bananas
 cost in
USA
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the USA
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 lifted to about $1.25 and
leveled
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levelled
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 out at the same
price
 for the next 6 years.
On the other hand
, the
price
 of
bananas
 was unstable in
Japan
 and Germany. The data in
Japan
 fluctuated throughout the period, showing a repeated pattern of rise and fall.
Furthermore
, the
price
 in Germany diminished twice in 1997 and 1999, and was increasing till 2002, after
that
is
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it
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 went down to about $1.75 and remained plateau.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, japan, usa, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • price fluctuation
  • steady increase/decrease
  • significant rise/drop
  • trend
  • noticeable
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • highest
  • lowest
  • throughout the period
  • stable
  • volatile
  • potential reasons
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