Some Individuals claim that many people prefer to live nearby to their native area where they
tookVerb problem
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birth. They are so connected to their roots
asCorrect word choice
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they don’t want to leave that
where their ancestor spent their whole life.
essay will lead to both
prosCorrect article usage
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and cons of
view and will discuss
inCorrect pronoun usage
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the following paragraph.
The primary reason
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statement is that many persons love their homeland as their perception is
tooCorrect your spelling
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never leave
yourCorrect pronoun usage
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birthplace which
gaveWrong verb form
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them an opportunity to grow and
helpedWrong verb form
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to
improvesWrong verb form
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their internal and outer skills for
getting Verb problem
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success in their
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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. Over time, they build connections. These networks render social support,
opportunitiesCorrect word choice
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for
collaborationsFix the agreement mistake
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.
The positive side of living close to the
where they
broughtAdd a missing verb
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up is,
someCorrect word choice
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tend to feel comfortable and secure near their family surroundings. Staying close to the near and dear
oneFix the agreement mistake
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provides
senseAdd an article
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of belonging and
deepCorrect article usage
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connection to the local community and culture. Not only it
helpsWrong verb form
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to determine the strong support system of
family’sChange noun form
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during needy time
as illness, emergencies, or other challenges but
increase Verb problem
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the Correct article usage
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strengthen the bond.
, there is another side
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coinAdd an article
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, there are various disadvantages to support
believeReplace the word
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, staying in
familiarCorrect article usage
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might not give them an opportunity to grow and widen
yourCorrect pronoun usage
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connections earlier which were limited to only local ones. Your experience won’t help to get more exposure,
and Correct word choice
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whichCorrect pronoun usage
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is not useful to potentially grow in personal and professional terms.
, staying in
similarCorrect article usage
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will not lead to
successfulAdd an article
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career, as one may not receive good opportunities to broaden their horizons professionally as limited options will not be helpful for
development.
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, some
choseWrong verb form
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to live near
theChange the word
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birthplace because of family ties, cultural identity, emotional attachment and strong
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communities’Change noun form
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networks,
living in
other partChange the wording
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of the countries which helps them to explore more and
will Verb problem
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have more
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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in terms of lifestyle and
have Unnecessary verb
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good career growth.