Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
this
contemporary era,
people
's choices are getting varied from
time
to
time
, in
this
case, a larger portion of society gives preference to the internet for getting engaged with others rather than coming in front of those persons who are familiar with each other. As far as
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am concerned it has totally negative effects on the
overall
society and
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would like to put some shed light on the causes
as well as
the bad impacts in the upcoming paragraphs. There are multifarious facts to justify the reasons. First of all, the more
time
people
surf the internet for social meetings, the more comfort they will have because they do not need to communicate to meet anyone as well and ultimately it will save them
time
.
For example
, nowadays with the increasing demands of their families, everyone is busy in their working life , and as a
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result they do not get enough
time
for their friends to meet face to face. In order to keep in touch always give preference to online mode of technology.
Apart from
this
, technology made life much easier for those
people
who are very lethargic and do not want to come out of their comfort zone. To illustrate an example, if they want to get anything
then
instead
of going to any shopping centre , but
also
order online to receive their order at home. If I talk about the effects
then
in point of my way,
this
scenario has an
overall
bad impact as
while
spending most of their
time
on the internet, they do not get a chance to expose themselves to outdoor activities ,
consequently
, it is not only causing health problems but
also
a huge problem for the whole world.
Besides
this
, the continuity of
this
trend made relationships weak rather than building them.
For example
,
people
do not know the actual feelings of another person
such
as if someone had gone through the bad times
then
instead
of helping of person, they just try to ignore it by making excuses
such
as related with work and family
time
.
To conclude
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opine that the government should look into these aspects carefully and put some limitations on the use of online modes because it is not online detrimental for human beings but for the whole world that comes under it.
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