The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The provided chart depicts the
number
of shop closures and openings in a country from 2011 to 2018.
It is clearly observed from the graph that the economic trend between shops
declined as the number
of shops
which were closed increased and similarly
the number
of new shops
fell.
In 2011, the number
of new shops
was about 8500 and this
figure
dramatically decreased to 4000 in the next year. In addition
, from 2012 to 2014, just above 6000 new shops
were set up and in 2015 this
number
fell to 4000. Moreover
, between 2015 and 2017, this
figure
almost remained constant at 4000. Then
, over the next years, the number
of opening new shops
dropped to 3000.
For shops
which were ,closed the figure
stood at 6200 in 2011. Furthermore
, over the next 4 years, this
number
fluctuated around 6500. In contrast
, the proportion of closed shops
dropped substantially to under 1000, whereas
for the next year, it rose to over 5000. In addition
, this
figure
stood at almost the same place for the next 2 years.Submitted by Fatemeghahremanii97 on
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