The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port City Center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
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The multi-line graph illustrates data regarding
crime
among types of condition
from different regions in New Port City between 2003 and 2012. Generally speaking, Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
it is clear that
the overall
incidence has dramatically decreased in the considered time period, albeit with specific trends for each event.
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robberies
However
, the crime
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, slumping from 3700 to roughly 1000 between 2004 and 2008. At the same time, the number of Fix the agreement mistake
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thefts
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which
from 2700 dropped down to nearly 2000. After that, the events of Correct pronoun usage
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approximately 1500 and 2300 respectively.
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