You are planning a holiday and want to find out about the kinds of holiday packages that can be arranged by a local company. Write a letter to the company to ask for information about the holiday packages they offer. In your letter: •say where and when you would like to go •include details about the kind of holiday you would like to take •say what kind of information you would like to receive

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask about the tailored holiday packages you offer. My partner and I would like to take a trip in August

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year with our two young children. We intend to visit Bali for two weeks but, never having been to Asia before, we have no idea how to organise a trip that will meet our different interests and requirements. I would

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like some information on the different kinds of packages you can provide. We would like to spend time at a beach, but we

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hope to experience some of the more cultural features of Balinese life. It is essential that there are age-appropriate activities available for our children, who are 8 and 10 years old. Please ensure any cultural activities are both child-friendly and engaging. Based on the information I have outlined here, please reply with details on the kinds of holiday packages you can offer to meet our specific needs. I would appreciate it if you would send me two or three different options based on prices, accommodation types, locations and types of activities available. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Isobel Smith

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task response

The letter effectively addresses the task and provides detailed information about the holiday requirements and requests for information.

coherence and cohesion

The coherence and cohesion are generally good, with clear paragraph structure and logical progression. The greeting and closing are appropriate, but could be slightly more formal for a business letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

holiday packages
itinerary
destination
accommodation
all-inclusive
guided tours
cultural immersion
leisure activities
budget-friendly
customisable options
early-bird specials
peak/off-peak season
travel insurance
cancellation policy
customer testimonials
exotic locales
escape
adventure
relaxation
brochures

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