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The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness rating for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children rating on the overall ratings of married couples.

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness rating for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children rating on the overall ratings of married couples.
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of both married and unmarried satisfaction rates based on several age groups, including the happiness percentage by children for the married
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. Generally, it is clearly depicted that the married person seems to be more happy than the opposite whether they have children or not. Despite lower than half the
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 portion of married people, the first tabulated data shows that it is still much more delightful compared to the unmarried. As seen almost all different age groups have just slightly below 50% except for the 50-64 years old
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. Meanwhile, the unmarried person is depicted
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 as the group aged from 18-64 years old only has slightly over a fifth except for the eldest group which has just over a third of happiness.
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, the infants
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 affected the satisfaction rates for the married couples even though most of them are the
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 who is under 18. As illustrated,
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 provides the highest portion with over two-fifths.
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, having children over 18 years old appears to be the least as it only represents 41% of happiness. Surprisingly, the
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 who does not have any adolescence is only 1 per cent below the highest
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicted" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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