Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which point of view do you agree with?

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waste
time
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However
, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can
also
be made against the idea. In my
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class is critical for
students
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the idea. - [ ] The main obstacle would appear to be lectures are essential for understanding the materials.
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means that many education
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institutions
put an
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expert
teachers for each subject who have abilities to reach knowledge to
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easily and tell them what is important, the
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focus
on it, and how can question come from
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topic. For
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example
, the
last
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universty
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university
showed that
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of
students
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the
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course
because they
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attending the lesson, rather than
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who failed in the same
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courses
course
due to
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neglected
.
Consequently
, lectures could help
students
to increase their performance
academily
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academically
academic
academy
. A
further
issue is that lectures may
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able
develop skills and
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proper
prepare
learner
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for life.
For instance
, it makes individuals care about
time
because they get used to
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or they will be
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punishment
by
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the teacher
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.
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Moreover
, it allows
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to coordinate their studies as part of group work, hopefully making their lesson less teacher_led and more about autonomous learning.
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itself teaches study
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such
as
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as well as
communication skills between other
students
or teachers.
Hence
,
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can
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pupils
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characters. It is true that there are some
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negative
to
students
for attending class , most notably
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their
time
because most teachers are reading materials without
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. Despite
this
, it seems that for many adolescent people, these
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are outweighed by pleasure which can develop
students
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academically
academic
and their skills. ‏
To conclude
, without any doubt,
this
is a mixed bag. If
this
topic has many positives
then
the negative points of
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may not be underestimated.
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