The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.
The data provided in the form of a bar chart illustrates how many percentage of
students
moved to English-speaking countries for study in two years, 2004 and 2012, while
the table copmares
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the total
Overall
, USA and Canada were the most and least popular countries among stronger students
over the surveyed period. Also
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Australia
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student
from other nations saw a rise in all countries compared with the population of Change to a plural noun
students
students
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In 2004, about 180,000 immigrated to the USA for
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study
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grew by 70,000 in 2012. Change preposition
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porportion
of American Correct your spelling
proportion
students
and foreign ones did not changed
over the period and stood at 2%.
The UK and Australia followed the same pattern and the figure for pupils went up from 120,000 to nearly 200,000. Change the verb form
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On the other hand
, there was an upward trend in the attendees in education systems in the UK and Australiain
from other parts of the world, 4% and 5%, respectively.
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Canadian
students
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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