Computers have become so advanced and interactive that students in the future will have no need for a human educator in the classroom. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer

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that technology has revolutionized the utmost educational landscape where
children
will no longer require
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a teacher’s
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assistance in the classroom. I firmly believe that
children
need
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the sheer
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guidance of
teachers
in various aspects of their study matter.
Computers
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usage has increased substantially in the recent era because of its dynamic software features.
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its utilization holds some limitations.
Computer
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lacks
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emotional feelings which
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helpful
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a helpful
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source of communication among
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teachers
and pupils.
However
,
teachers
not only introduce the new subject topics but
also
encourages
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the students to overcome their weaknesses.
This
builds up the healthy relationship among them and
subsequently
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the acquired results.
Thus
,
computers
cannot compensate
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physical presence of the
teachers
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of
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the fact
computers
are instilled with the latest artificial intelligence software which abruptly
solve
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the
children
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query, the schools have
standard
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a standard
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leaning
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learning
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curriculum for their
children
.
In addition
, the institutions follow the parameters which calculate the individual’s growth in every
subjects
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subject
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.
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, if the student
could not
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perform well in exams, the
institutions
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has assigned the special education department who anxiously dig out the concerning elements which
computers
cannot highlight because of the lack of communication. In
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conclusion,
although
technology usage is a common domain in every educational platform, it cannot surpass the physical presence of the teacher who is a constant source of motivation in the studies.
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