The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The pie charts illustrate the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure
activities
among European adults
in 2 different years, 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, it is noticeable that in 1995, there were more activities
for adults
to do in their leisure time compared to 1985. And watching TV was
the most common activity that Wrong verb form
is
adults
love to do in their free time.
There were about 5 activities
for adults
to do in 1985. Watching TV was the most common thing to do with 32%, followed by 2 activities
which were eating out and talking with friends, were
approximate to each other with 23% and 21%,Correct pronoun usage
which were
,
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besides
friends, adults
also
liked to talk with their family, which had 18%, the other activities
such
as play sport, reading book
only had 6%.
In 1995, the figure has been fluctuated a bit, watching TV still ranked at Add an article
a book
the book
the
first place, being the most common activity that Correct article usage
apply
adults
do, with 30%, which lower than in 1985. Due to
the development of technology, playing computer game
was the second of the Fix the agreement mistake
games
activities
that adults
commonly do, followed by talking with friends with 26%. Sadly, family conversation was
decreased Unnecessary verb
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with
only 7%, eating out Change preposition
by
with
8%, and other Change preposition
by
activities
with
the least, 2%.Change preposition
by
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