You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.( Task 1 letter writing)

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in your job that taught my language to your two
children
for
a
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one year. It was published in the Australian newspaper. My Name is Shaini Wasna and I am 26 years old. Currently, I am Studying physical science and I do it part-time at the University of Oxford. I think that
this
job is the best for me because I have prior experience of teaching
for
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children
.
Moreover
, I completed language in English for education.
In addition
to
this
, I have good communication skills
as well as
I know how to deal with
children
according to
their choices. I would like to tell you, I can look after your babies after 5 pm on weekdays and full-time on weekends. Not only I can play with them but
also
I can make food
according to
the babies's ages. So If you wish, I can stay with your
children
during my free time. To be honest,
This
job is a valuable opportunity for me because it may help to get experience in my career life.
Furthermore
, I am trying to join with pediatric psychological department next year. So Your babies's behaviours and learning abilities are very useful in my ongoing research. If could you give me
this
position, I would highly appreciate it. Yours faithfully, Shaini.
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