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disruptive school stundents have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately.

#school #stundents #influence #students
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There is a saying that goes like "
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 book,
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 teacher and
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 school shapes the student's life". Each and every
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 on
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 planet is encouraged to have a minimal education so that he becomes a responsible citizen of the country going
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. And
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 can be achieved right from a young age in schools. I agree with the above context saying that disruptive
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 have a negative influence on others. I think it is true. The actions of
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person
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 can surely influence others as well until and unless the
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 who is getting affected is well aware of what he is doing. If it is
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 he will be misled and go on to become
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 of them.
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 at a very young age will be exposed to different sorts of things through social media, movies and even the environment
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 plays a big role. There was a boy at our school who happened to roam with people who were much older than him and he got into bad habits. His way of approach changed as he spent more time with them. Started to act rude, polite and irresponsible.
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 influenced the
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 who were his friends from school. Being macho, loud and rude was kind of fun is what they had thought and tried to be
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. But in ,reality it is not. For sure
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 who are noisy and disobedient have to be taken care of in the schools.
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 , they have to make them understand that the way they have chosen is whether right or wrong. Handle them with patience and in
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 right manner.
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, If
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 doesn't work out they have to be filtered from the others and should be guided separately. It is a difficult task but in the long run, they will realize the importance of being a disruptive student is not an ideal thing to lead a good life.
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 I would like to say that every
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 has to enjoy life so much so that the
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 will be well aware of his limits and be a responsible citizen for his country.
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