It is observed that today communication between family members in today’s times is less as compared to the past. However, some people do not think so. Do you agree or disagree?

The issue of the growing

nThe

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the

issue of the growing

number

of obesity in the world has become a matter of discussion for many. In my view, poor dietary choices,

sedentary

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lifestyle and

growing

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fast

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food

culture are main the reasons to name

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few. In

this

essay, I shall outline the main causes for

this

change and analyse the possible solutions.

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of obesity in the world has become a matter of discussion for many. In my view, poor dietary choices,

sedentary

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a sedentary

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lifestyle and

growing

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a growing

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fast

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fast-food

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food

culture are main the reasons to name

the

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a

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few. In

this

essay, I shall outline the main causes

for

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this

change and analyse the possible solutions. There are multiple predominant factors resulting in

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the rapid

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growth of the

number

of obese

people

and decreasing quality of health.

Firstly

, in our today's world, we live a very

fast paced

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life, which leaves little to no room for cooking healthy

food

at home.

As a result

, many

people

resort to eating processed or

ready made

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meals,

this

type of

food

is very high in both trans-saturated fat and sugar. Which is linked to many health ailments, including obesity.

Secondly

, a recent study at Stanford

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showed that most

people

living in Canada on average spent

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7 hours

or more sitting and doing no physical activity. That same study

also

linked heart diseases and poor weight management among

people

with

such

type of lifestyle.

Lastly

, fast

food

has now become a part of our culture and

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the majority

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of

people

consume it on a daily basis. A very large

number

of studies show that a high

number

of calories, oil and sugar present in fast

food

, is the main driving force behind cardiovascular diseases, diabetes and increased body fat. So what can be done? I believe that the problem has to be tackled on a

number

of levels.

For example

,

by

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making healthy dietary choices that are low in sugar and fat, could go a long way in terms of

overall

fitness.

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,

government

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the government

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can impose new regulations to limit the amount of fructose, cholesterol and trans-saturated fat in fast

food

meals. Adding to

this

, it will

also

be beneficial to mandate offices and companies to hire fitness and nutritional coaches, to provide guidance to those who are looking to make positive changes in their diet. In conclusion, from the given arguments and examples

it is clear that

various solutions exist to mitigate

this

problem, which

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an effort from both

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and

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the government

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. In the future, we

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only expect to see any improvement if

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we work together to eliminate the causes of

this

growing global issue.