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More and more people are opting for readymade food intead of freshly home cooked food. Discuss advantageous and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, outside dining and takeouts have become a new trend for many people.
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 merits and demerits which will be discussed in
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 essay. On the one hand, There are numerous advantages to eating in restaurants outside.
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, many restaurants offer impeccable services and tasty
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, for good prices.
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 as a hook to attract
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 to eat inside the place.
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, in
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 era almost everybody is
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, they tend to spend many hours at work and forget to make
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 at home.
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, they prefer to dine outside.
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, if a busy mother forgets to prepare meals for her kids, She will buy a readymade meal from any shop just to feed her family.
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, there are many
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 applications that facilitate ordering with just a click of a button. These apps provide discounts on a certain
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 place
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 places just to attract
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, it is called
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 leader" mentality.
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, Talabat is a well-known app for its special discounts that attract people to buy
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,
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 it lure the
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 to buy things from their own grocery online store.
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, readymade meals are not free of flaws. There are many disadvantages to be considered when
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 out.
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 with, there is no warranty that either the
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 or the restaurant will be clean and sanitary. Some places look fascinating from the outside, but on looking inside their kitchens which are permitted to only staff members it will be shocking.
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 is because those areas lack sanitary requirements. A lot of chefs take advantage of the idea that
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 can not look inside the kitchen.
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, a few years back I remembered an incident in a famous restaurant where the police closed the place
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 the lack of sanitary requirements.
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, the staff may be difficult to deal with or rude which leaves unpleasant experience. In conclusion, It can be reiterated that takeouts or readymade meals have their pros and cons. It is recommended to work on how to
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mitigate
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