The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The given map illustrates the location and surroundings of the Eiffel Tower in Paris and displays the basic structure of the upcoming expenditure program.
According to
the provided information, the skyscraper is located in the east of Paris, standing beside the south side of the River of Seine, and is connected by the river with Place de la Concorde, Musée d’Orsay, and Musée du Louvre. The Jardin du Luxembourg can be found in the east-south of it.
This
great architecture possesses a height of 324 meters, and the weight of its metal structures is 10,100 tonnes. Two viewing platforms are designed on the building’s body for the utilization of sightseeing, which are
located 57 and 115 meters above the ground respectively. In the following plan of extending the underground space beneath the metal giant, five floors will be constructed, and illuminated by glass ceilings, and will be used for ticket offices, entertainment areas, and parking lots.
Change the verb form
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To sum up
, the Eiffel Tower is located on the east side of Paris, beside the Seine, which possesses a tremendous scale. The upcoming building program will provide more profitable spaces for Paris’ citizens.Submitted by norra_gsy on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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