You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. What course you are studying? What you are not happy about. What you expect from the school director.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the night course which I attended

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week but I am not happy with the way of teaching. Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and my ID number is BCA425. I enrolled myself in the Bachelor of Computer application on 25 August. Because I am busy in the daytime

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my work, I chose the night session from 8 p.m. to 9 p.m. for study. I would like to explain some reasons why I am unhappy with your institution's teaching staff. During the class, the teacher remains busy scrolling the social sites and communicating with friends

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of teaching the students. So, I can not get enough information regarding the theory of computers.

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, during practical time, the teacher does not explain in brief which is why I am not familiar with computer features. I need

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skill for my profession.

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, I want you to take strict action regarding my issue. So, you have to ask your employees to use their phones in their spare time or after finishing the class.

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, teachers would explain all features effectively. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. What course you are studying? What you are not happy about. What you expect from the school director.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Student should pay the full cost for their study because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hand are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.

You are going on a short training course at a college in Sydney, Australia. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it