You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. What course you are studying? What you are not happy about. What you expect from the school director.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the night course which I attended

last

week but I am not happy with the way of teaching. Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and my ID number is BCA425. I enrolled myself in the Bachelor of Computer application on 25 August. Because I am busy in the daytime

due to

my work, I chose the night session from 8 p.m. to 9 p.m. for study. I would like to explain some reasons why I am unhappy with your institution's teaching staff. During the class, the teacher remains busy scrolling the social sites and communicating with friends

instead

of teaching the students. So, I can not get enough information regarding the theory of computers.

Besides

this

, during practical time, the teacher does not explain in brief which is why I am not familiar with computer features. I need

this

skill for my profession.

Finally

, I want you to take strict action regarding my issue. So, you have to ask your employees to use their phones in their spare time or after finishing the class.

Moreover

, teachers would explain all features effectively. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are attending a night course at the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. What course you are studying? What you are not happy about. What you expect from the school director.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competition at work, at school in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society, which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish. What are the causes and the solutions?