You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well.

This

is Dream, your friend. I am writing

this

letter to tell you that I

bring

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your

Ipad

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iPad

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Pro to my home.

This

the

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big

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apply

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mistake.

Firstly

, I want to say sorry to you. I

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apply

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really enjoyed

while

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it while

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was

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staying

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your house with you. The

last

Friday was a wonderful day for me. It is the best house party for me.

Moreover

, I enjoyed

to spent

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time with your family. Your mom is so kind. She baked a chocolate cake for me. I think I can remember the taste of them. So, thank you so much

to invite

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for inviting

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me to join your house party. As I told you, the mistake happened is I brought your

Ipad

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iPad

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Pro to my home. I think that I thought it was mine. Because your

Ipad

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iPad

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Pro between my

Ipad pro

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iPad Pro

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are

the

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in the

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same case. There

are

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the white case. I thought that it

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apply

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was mine. So, I

putted

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put

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them into my shoulder bag.

Besides

, I know that you must use them for

you

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apply

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studying online.

However

, when I knew that I

got

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had made

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a big mistake, I

want

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wanted

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to bring them back to you immediately. My plan to give it back to you is tomorrow at noon. I will go to your home

for returning

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to return

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the

Ipad

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iPad

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Pro. I hope to see you soon and thanks for your understanding. Best wishes, Dream

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

241 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

as the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and disciss at least one problem that may result

Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies?

In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In my country, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?