You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well.
This
is Dream, your friend. I am writing
this
letter to tell you that I
bring
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your
Ipad
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iPad
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Pro to my home.
This
is
the
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a
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big
my
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mistake.
Firstly
, I want to say sorry to you. I
am
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really enjoyed
while
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it while
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I
am
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was
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staying
in
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at
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your house with you. The
last
Friday was a wonderful day for me. It is the best house party for me.
Moreover
, I enjoyed
to spent
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spending
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time with your family. Your mom is so kind. She baked a chocolate cake for me. I think I can remember the taste of them. So, thank you so much
to invite
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for inviting
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me to join your house party. As I told you, the mistake happened is I brought your
Ipad
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iPad
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Pro to my home. I think that I thought it was mine. Because your
Ipad
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iPad
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Pro between my
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are
the
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in the
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same case. There
are
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is
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the white case. I thought that it
is
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was mine. So, I
putted
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put
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them into my shoulder bag.
Besides
, I know that you must use them for
you
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studying online.
However
, when I knew that I
got
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had made
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a big mistake, I
want
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wanted
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to bring them back to you immediately. My plan to give it back to you is tomorrow at noon. I will go to your home
for returning
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to return
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the
Ipad
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iPad
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Pro. I hope to see you soon and thanks for your understanding. Best wishes, Dream
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