Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank them for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you

Dear

sarah

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Sarah

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, I hope you doing well. I would like to send

this

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to say thank you

to make

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for making

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our trip so wonderful.

Firstly

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, as you know

that

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apply

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we go to many

place

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places

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together but

i

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I

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forgot to take a camera with us. So you

decide

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decided

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to

to

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apply

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take a picture for us and

i

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I

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have got

recieve

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received

it yesterday it was so beautiful and

i

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I

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want to say thank you for taking

those precieous photo

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that precieous photo

those precieous photos

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for

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of

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me. We

have

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had

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so many great

time

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times

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and

i

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really

appriciate

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appreciate

that.

Secoundly

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Secondly

,

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have to say sorry that

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replying

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this

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to this

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letter earlier because

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forgot

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left

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my laptop at the office yesterday. Hope you understand it. And if you have anything that you want to

for

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do for

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a holiday trip don't hesitate to text me back. And for the

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accommodation

accommondetion

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,accommondetion

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i

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I

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would like to recommend you to stay with us. Please let me know what you thinking about and

i

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hope you like

this

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plan. Best wishes Prim