You recently did a short cookery courses. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

Dear Sir and Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am Lisa, one of the
student
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that did
a short cookery courses
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a short cookery course
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. I am writing
this
letter to write my feedback on
this
course.
Firstly
, I would like to say that I really enjoyed
with
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your cookery courses.
This
is
such
a wonderful baking bakery
courses
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that I ever learn.
Besides
, the head chef
that
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tought
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taught
me how to do Tom Yum Kung.
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