You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of how long you will be away suggest how you will make up for the lost time

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Dear Manager, I am writing to you seeking

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your approval to take some days off,

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you may ,know I have not gone on leave since January,

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I need some time to recharge my energy. I planning to go on leave from 10th September to 25th August 2023. I will be in the country

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, you can reach me anytime. I have prepared the handover note for my colleagues. My plan is to come back before the financial reporting time, I have prepared the all necessary documents,

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, I will only have to consolidate all the data. I am looking forward to hearing from you and getting the approval for my leave. Best Regards, Employee

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

117 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Task 1. The picture below shows the differences in the layout of the conference centre