You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of how long you will be away suggest how you will make up for the lost time

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Dear Manager, I am writing to you seeking

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your approval to take some days off,

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you may ,know I have not gone on leave since January,

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I need some time to recharge my energy. I planning to go on leave from 10th September to 25th August 2023. I will be in the country

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, you can reach me anytime. I have prepared the handover note for my colleagues. My plan is to come back before the financial reporting time, I have prepared the all necessary documents,

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, I will only have to consolidate all the data. I am looking forward to hearing from you and getting the approval for my leave. Best Regards, Employee

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

117 words

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You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of how long you will be away suggest how you will make up for the lost time

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In recent years, women's roles have changed dramatically. What changes have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative

•Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Some people believe this exerts a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

Some people think that young people electronic and computer games is helpful while the others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.