The pie charts give information about how much money collected and spent for children’s charity in one year in USA.
The pie charts give information about how much
money
was collected and spent on children’s charity
in one year in the USA.
First of all, the total amount of Fix the agreement mistake
charities
money
that was collected equal
to $53,561,580 and the total Add a missing verb
was equal
money
spent equal
to $53,224,896 and approximately $437 remained. Donated food was one of the main sources of Add a missing verb
was equal
money
donation (86.6%). The second main money
donation was community contributions (10.4%). While
, other sources such
as program
revenue, investment income, government grants, and other income were only 3%.
On the other hand
, the expenditures included program
services
, fundraising, and management and general services
. The greatest amount (95.8%) of donated money
was spent on children's program
services
. In addition
, 2.6% of the total money
was used for fundraising services
. Further
, 1.6% was spent on management and general services
.
Overall
, the highest amount for
collection of Change preposition
apply
money
was Donated food, while
most of the
Remove the article
apply
them
was spent on children's Correct pronoun usage
it
program
services
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