The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
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The line graph illustrates the usage of various types of meat in a country in Europe from 1979 to 2004
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, the consumption of chicken grew significantly,
while
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that of beef and lamb decreased dramatically over the years. The amount of fish which is used by a person in a week did not change a lot.
Firstly
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, beef was eaten more at the beginning of the period with over two hundred
grams
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. Around 1894, it peaked at roughly 250
grams
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.
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,
as a result
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of a fluctuation, the number dropped to around a hundred
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in 2004.
Likewise
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, people ate lamb nearly 150
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a week in 1979 and
this
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was its peak point. Over time the figure went down and stopped above 50
at the end
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of the given period.
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chicken was not the most consumed kind of meat
first,
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people used more and more chicken as the years passed. The number was just under 150 in 1979, but it soared to over 250 in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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