Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the current 246
bus
services.
My name is Kate Okada and I am a student at Victoria college
. I have been using 246 Capitalize word
College
buses
from Brighton to the city centre to go to the
school on weekdays for almost two years.
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apply
Although
the 246 bus
service used to have four buses
per hour, it was suddenly reduced to only two buses
without any notifications last
month. When I phoned the customer service department, I was told that your company had to decide to reduce Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
this
service in order to save labor
costs.
Change the spelling
labour
However
, I believe this
situation has been affecting not only me but also
the other passengers who rely on the same bus
route. In fact, a few other people and I could not even get on the bus
at 7.15am from Brighton last
friday
as the Change the capitalization
Friday
bus
was already fully packed when it arrived there. I would, therefore
, like to request that your company operates
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operate
buses
with the previous time schedule again for passengers' needs and safety. If you could consider and proceed with my request immediately, I would really appreciate it.
Please contact me anytime if you need any further
information.
Thank you very much.
Yours faithfully,
Kate OkadaSubmitted by keiko_o_1209 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite