Shortage of houses has become a severe problem in the cities today and only the government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

Nowadays

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are adjusting to the new advancements and amenities ,

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there are some consequences of living in a cutting edge environment ,lack of

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is the biggest issue in the cities which seems to be addressed and could only be resolved by the

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. I believe

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problem can not only be solved by the

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by society as a whole.

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with, the shortage of

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is escalating at an alarming rate ,

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the

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should step forward to improve the living conditions. The predominant step that can be taken by the

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should be to use empty lands to construct high-rise buildings so

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can at least have a basic lifestyle. In cities like Delhi and Mumbai, skyscrapers can be vividly seen to accommodate folks who are residing there from different parts of the country in order to get jobs or to have quality education.

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, constructing apartments for civilians should be the utmost priority of the

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.

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, since

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also

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have some responsibilities towards their country , they need to control the population rate. The overwhelming population is a severe issue that needs to be controlled as

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this

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civics are facing new problems day by day which include the lack of

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. In China, it is declared by the

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to have only one child to balance the overpopulation ,

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people

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are not cooperating with the

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to improve

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problem.

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, civilians are the

culprit

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putting stress on the nation's budget to build more and more

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. In conclusion,

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government

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should witness and take steps to address the housing problem,

people

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are equally responsible for controlling overpopulation. From my point of view, the lack of

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can be addressed with the combined efforts of the

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and the

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