The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The given chart highlights information about the number of tabloids sold by each person in five territories in 2000 and 2010
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sales in 2020.
Overall
, it can be seen that Country
B
was at the top of the list and it is obvious that the same trend will continue even in 2020
Conversely
, Conurbation D was the only category at which point ; its sales are about to increase in the coming year. Looking at the details, in 2000 Country
B
sold fifty magazines and it was followed by one per cent Lower by Territory A. Followingly, Conurbation C sold approximately under two-fifths but strikingly, Conurbations D and E as well sold eighteen and five respectively. Regarding 2010,the same process is observed in both A and
B
with 45 and 47 sales and a steady decrease concerning C, D and E. As for 2020,Conurbation
B
would beat others with 45 and A would be ranked second with eight per cent lower than it and others are about to follow each other in the same line.
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