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The diagram below shows how banana chips are made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The flow diagram demonstrates the process by which
banana
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 chips are made.
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, the process of making
banana
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 chips is divided into ten steps, including peeling, soaking, slicing, rinsing, frying, removing and draining, cooling, adding spices, packaging, and distributing. In the first phase, the fresh bananas are peeled.
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the peeled bananas are soaked in water. In the third step, the bananas are sliced into pieces.
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, after rinsing the
banana
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 pieces, they are placed in a tank, where they are fried in oil.
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the fried
banana
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 pieces are removed from the boiling oil and
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 drained on a web-liked tool. After that, they are moved to a plate, where they are cooled by a fan and added spices on the plate for a
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. In the final step, after going through the process of adding spices, the
banana
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 slices are packaged into packages and distributed all around the globe.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words banana with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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