The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The Graph illustrates that Five Nations individuals bought a
number
of magazines in the year 2000, and 2010 and
also
estimated sales in 2020.
Overall
, The magazine sold
number
is varied in all countries,
in addition
the sold graph decreased in high sold countries.
To begin
, three countries among the five showed a decreasing line of the newspaper read.
Also
, the two-country news reader's initial
number
is the same at 50 but the decline rate is more frequent in nation A which reaches expectations
less
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of less
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than 40 in comparison nation B is more than 40.
Moreover
, Country C
also
showed the same consequences where the initial reader is almost
near by
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nearby
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40 and assumed the
number
in 2020 is some percentage more than 30.
In Contrast
, Country D showed the opposite to compare the before. The
number
of readers is increasing which started from less than 20 and expected more than 20 in recent years.
Furthermore
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the remaining nations did not show significant changes where
a
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the
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number
of people
was
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were
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almost steady state though
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the increase
an increase
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increase
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increased
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in the middle time.
To conclude
, The newspaper brought quantity is changing across the country , correspondingly the chart was dipped in high reader nations.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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