The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The Graph illustrates that Five Nations individuals bought a
number
of magazines in the year 2000, and 2010 and also
estimated sales in 2020. Overall
, The magazine sold number
is varied in all countries, in addition
the sold graph decreased in high sold countries.
To begin
, three countries among the five showed a decreasing line of the newspaper read. Also
, the two-country news reader's initial number
is the same at 50 but the decline rate is more frequent in nation A which reaches expectations less
than 40 in comparison nation B is more than 40. Change preposition
of less
Moreover
, Country C also
showed the same consequences where the initial reader is almost near by
40 and assumed the Correct your spelling
nearby
number
in 2020 is some percentage more than 30.
In Contrast
, Country D showed the opposite to compare the before. The number
of readers is increasing which started from less than 20 and expected more than 20 in recent years. Furthermore
the remaining nations did not show significant changes where Add a comma
,Furthermore
a
Correct article usage
the
number
of people was
almost steady state though Change the verb form
were
Add an article
the increase
an increase
increase
in the middle time.
Wrong verb form
increased
To conclude
, The newspaper brought quantity is changing across the country , correspondingly the chart was dipped in high reader nations.Submitted by jonahid.stu20ju on
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