Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays, people use different ways to
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their
wastes
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. But it seems there
are
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not
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no
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an
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efficient way and we need
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powerful structure for that. Recycling has numerous benefits for us.
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, rebuild something which
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made
by
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plastics or we can produce energy. In
this
topic, we will discuss
about
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the importance of recycling and
it's
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supporting
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by governments by taking some examples
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for
detailed
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conclusion. In our city, citizens must pay attention to their
wastes
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and its problems.
For instance
,
garbages
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can provide space for rats to increase themselves and bring some diseases.
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, if we recycle our
wastes
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, we can
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something with rubbish without any paying money. For illustrate, some sports
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which
are belongs
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to a football club, are produced by seawastes and it is very unique.
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can
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set the wheels of related industries and might be an attractive idea for some people. Another point
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can be mentioned that related to energy, especially power. In scientific
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,
wastes
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black gold. Because we produce
electricity
by burning
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. If we were able to build more plants for
this
, we could have
a
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more
electricity
. By doing
this
, we have helped ourselves. Because we have done two things at the same time.
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we can make more
electricity
for industrial and home daily chores.
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we
helped
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the earth by reducing air
pollutions
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. In
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, after considering these examples, we understand the role of governments
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recycling and
build
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more plants for producing
electricity
. If governments loan some money to
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and help them to construct some power plants, we can have a better life with more energy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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