Fast food is becoming one part of life. Everywhere this has had effect on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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junky
food
became a norm of
every human being, which brings more hazardous consequences Change preposition
for
on
their daily Change preposition
to
routing
and Correct your spelling
routine
meals
. I strongly agree for
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with
this
statement because avoid
practising cooking methods, Wrong verb form
avoiding
as well as
apart from taking healthy meals
are common issues can be seen and it
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apply
would
elaborate Wrong verb form
will
profoundly
through Change preposition
on profoundly
this
essay.
To begin
with, reluctant
to prepare Add a missing verb
being reluctant
own
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your own
meal
at home is a trend these days. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
Although
people had busy lives in the past age, they tended to arrange their meals
because healthy and
unless Correct word choice
apply
having
alternatives. Wrong verb form
they had
However
, after fast- food
became popular the majority willing to use them
as theyCorrect pronoun usage
it
are
able to save Wrong verb form
were
their
time and Correct pronoun usage
apply
spent
on Wrong verb form
spend
another activities
, which Replace the adjective
another activity
other activities
help
to change their lives, Wrong verb form
helped
such
as travelling and learning as
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apply
that
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, ordering rice and instance
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instant
noodle
are being done often by my friends as they want to have extra time, which is Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
thy
usually spent on cooking, for their education. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Hence
, those junky
food
have
impacted strongly to alter the lives of Correct subject-verb agreement
has
public
.
Add an article
the public
Furthermore
, hesitate
to have nutritious Replace the word
the hesitation
meals
also
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is also
outcome
of the instant Add an article
the outcome
an outcome
meals
. To precise
, Add a missing verb
be precise
with
the community have been consuming Change preposition
apply
junky
item for long
run, Add an article
the long
a long
leads
to Correct pronoun usage
which leads
avoid
from Wrong verb form
avoiding
balance
diet, which is caused enormous life – related disorders Correct your spelling
balanced
such
as Diabetis
, Heart diseases Correct your spelling
diabetes
as
that. Because taking Correct word choice
and
nutritional
diet Correct article usage
a nutritional
consume
considerable time to prepare, which is Correct subject-verb agreement
consumes
people
dislike the most. Correct pronoun usage
what people
Nevertheless
, if someone prefer
to utilize conventional Change the verb form
prefers
food
, would enhance own
health condition, which is paramount for life. Correct pronoun usage
their own
For instance
, from my experience as a nurse, considerable
proportion of people, who Correct article usage
a considerable
came
to get medicines Wrong verb form
come
are
suffered from Unnecessary verb
apply
Diabetis
because of excessive usage of Correct your spelling
diabetes
backery
items on Correct your spelling
bakery
regular
basis. Correct article usage
a regular
Thus
, traditional diet habit is influenced by junky
food
in
presently.
Change preposition
apply
To conclude
, according to
the above clarification, these particular foods have made huge
impact on Add an article
a huge
life style
and eating Correct your spelling
lifestyle
habit
of the society Fix the agreement mistake
habits
such
as,
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apply
beingavoided
arranging own Correct your spelling
being avoided
meals
and reluctant
to take Add a missing verb
being reluctant
food
with nutritional value. Hence
, I thoroughly agree for
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with
this
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