The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The illustration shows the process involved in manufacturing ceramic pots.
Overall
, the 12 processes to gather ceramic can be divided into three stages: delivering the raw materials, industrial processing and colour
processing.
In the first stage, after the engine is solid, it will be delivered to the factory. In the industry stage, the material is crushed and mixed by the machine to advance to the next step It is sent into moulds and waits to dry in 4-6 hours. In next step is the clay pots assembled.
In the colour
stage, four different substeps are fundamental to get the final product. Firstly
, the clay pot is heated in an oven at 1000 degrees Celsius. Therefore
, it is colouring in a new cover. The new colour
product is then
colour
firing. Finally
, the ceramic pots are finished and ready for the grocery store.Submitted by youn.21 on
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