The given lie graph illustrate the amount of partiipants in 4 kinds of sports in particular inhabitant from 1985 to 2005.
The given line graph
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
participants
in 4 kinds of sports in particular
inhabitant from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, badminton and rugby experienced a downward trend and tennis’s participants
has
a quick increase over the period, Wrong verb form
had
while
basketball maintain
the Wrong verb form
maintained
participants
rate. Additionally
, at
the beginning, rugby Change the preposition
in
has
the most choices Wrong verb form
had
of
Change preposition
for
people
, but it was
Wrong verb form
has been
repalced
by tennis since 1995.
With regard to the two sports which show Correct your spelling
replaced
decrease
in Add an article
a decrease
participants
, both badminton and rubgy
were at roughly 55 Correct your spelling
rugby
people
and 250 people
, respectively. In terms of badminton, it decline
after beginning to 45 Wrong verb form
declined
people
, however
it varied to rise to 50 Add a comma
,however
people
and continued to levelled-off
Correct your spelling
levelled off
to
the year Change preposition
by
of
2005. Change preposition
apply
Likewise
, rubgy’s
Correct your spelling
rugby’s
participants
, although
started with the most of
Change preposition
apply
people
, it declined quickly and steady
over the entire Change the word
steadily
of
Change preposition
apply
period
from 250 to 50 Add an article
the period
people
in the last
year.
Turning toward to
the basketball sport that fluctuated in the first 15 years old and reached a peak of 100 Change preposition
apply
participants
in 2000, after which it decreased slowly to under 100 participants
in 2005. As for the
tennis sport, it stood at 150 Correct article usage
apply
people
at the beginning before rising significantly and exceeded rugby at 200 people
in 1995, it continued to increase to approximately 225 people
in 2005, become
the sport Wrong verb form
becoming
has
the most Correct pronoun usage
that has
participants
.Submitted by A group of student in Le Thanh Tong High School on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words participants, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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