The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. What do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?v

Nowadays, the level of imparity between wealthy and penurious

countries

is wider compared to centuries ago. There are various factors accounting for

this

issue. In

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essay,

i

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will explain them and suggest a solution for encountering

this

phenomenon as well. Over the past centuries, rich and powerful

countries

have always colonized less developed and vulnerable nations.

Firstly

,

due to

better quality of life and high salaries many educated individuals in poor

countries

decided to immigrate to developed states.

Thus

, their own country to gradually will suffer from

lack

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of expert and educated people.

Consequently

, inequality in socioeconomic fields between pool and reach nations is growing

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every year.

For example

, because of corruption and

less

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fewer

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job vacancies in many African nations, thousands of their graduated students leave their cities and decide to find proper

job

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jobs

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in Western

countries

.

Secondly

,

due to

systematic corruption in many underdeveloped states especially by top authorities, the money flow would not benefit ordinary penurious people.

Instead

, it will be invested in wealthy banks abroad in favour of a few

corrupted

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individuals.

Hence

, the inequality increases over time.

On the other hand

, there are several approaches

on

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which could encounter imparities between rich and poor

peoples

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people

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. First and foremost, there must be a strong attitude within the population in order to not only start multiple campaigns against depravity but

also

, encourage their citizens to invest in their own underprivileged state.

For example

, during the 2014 Ukraine crisis, people started huge programmed protests against their rulers to prohibit them from making their assets

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to Russia. In conclusion,

although

the inequality between wealthy and underprivileged States is rising, from my perspective, if a united nation takes necessary measures like a programmed plan to fight corruption,

this

level of imparity will

be decreased

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soon.