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In many countries paying for things using mobile phones (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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Nowadays, societies all over the world are connected by mobile phones through the Internet. Many things are changing in a very short period of
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, including mobile apps that used to be free and now many of them have a cost to use.
This
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 essay will discuss why paying for an
app
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 has more benefits than drawbacks. There are three primary reasons why paying for an application on a cellphone is more advantageous.
Firstly
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, it is far more performative; as the clients will pay for the service enterprises will try to deliver the best product.
For example
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, YouTube has a consolidated name in the market but, Spotify has dominated the music service because of the quality they offer.
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, it is more secure; currently, people’s data is a real concern since we have political privacy. Indeed, paid apps do a good job in terms of data protection because they can invest in software security.
Thirdly
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, the
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 is reasonable since it has many options to choose from. The competitiveness is huge so companies cannot charge too much money from users. In brief, it is worth paying for a mobile
app
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 the quantity of benefits it can provide.
On the other hand
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, paying for
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 services has some negative aspects too.
First,
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the
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 will increase after a
while
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. All the signatures have a starting cost that certainly will increase afterwards. In fact, the
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 of all mobile apps rises from
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 to
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 and the rules for
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 payment change as well.
Second,
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the experience is different; at the beginning choosing an
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 to download was easier and more fun and now is more like doing shopping. Indeed, since people will pay for something, they will probably spend a lot more
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 choosing a product.
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,
price
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 and experience are disadvantageous aspects of paying for a mobile
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.
To conclude
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,
although
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 using a cellphone
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 now means spending money in many cases, it has a lot of benefits that can be measured before making a choice. Even though there are negative points, these drawbacks do not surpass the advantages.

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task response
Expand on the disadvantages of paid apps to provide a more balanced discussion.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical flow between paragraphs to enhance coherence and cohesion.

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