the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
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This
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provided line graph indicates how many foreigners visited a specific Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017, in a period of seven years.
Overall
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, it can be seen that tourists were able to make their stay on
cruise
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ships
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or on the
island
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.
To begin
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, in 2010, the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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was about 0.3
million
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, which was the lowest
number
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of foreigners compared to their total count which was one
million
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in the same year.
However
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, the count of foreigners who stayed on the
island
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remained above
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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over the given time till 2015, after, that there was an intersection point between them because they have the same
number
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of tourists.
Then
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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elevated steadily to 2
million
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, in 2017, which was greater than the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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in the same year.
In addition
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to that, the total
number
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of tourists continued to elevate gradually, and
then
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; it experienced a stabilization between 2015 and 2016, and
then
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; it jumped sharply to 3.5
million
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, in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, ships, number, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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