the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
This
provided line graph indicates how many foreigners visited a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017, in a period of seven years.
Overall
, it can be seen that tourists were able to make their stay on
cruise
ships
or on the
island
.
To begin
, in 2010, the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
ships
was about 0.3
million
, which was the lowest
number
of foreigners compared to their total count which was one
million
in the same year.
However
, the count of foreigners who stayed on the
island
remained above
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
over the given time till 2015, after, that there was an intersection point between them because they have the same
number
of tourists.
Then
, the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
ships
elevated steadily to 2
million
, in 2017, which was greater than the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on the
island
in the same year.
In addition
to that, the total
number
of tourists continued to elevate gradually, and
then
; it experienced a stabilization between 2015 and 2016, and
then
; it jumped sharply to 3.5
million
, in 2017.
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