You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rohan, How are you? It's been a long time since we talked. I hope you are doing great. I got your email about considering taking driving lessons. Well, I guess it is the best plan for you, considering your situation as you live away from the residential area. It provides you with various benefits like your own transportation to go to work will save you time to do some other stuff.

Moreover

, it will help you to visit different places near your area. One of my friends

also

learned to drive recently and he provided me with the contact information of the instructor. His name is Ishan and owns a driving school near your address. I will send you detailed information about the trainer so that you can get the best lessons. The instructor will help you to get the license in just 1 month. One more thing I wanna add is

while

taking the lessons please keep one thing in mind that consistency and determination are always required to learn something new. I hope you get the license ASAP and

then

we will go on a long drive to some beautiful spot. Good luck with your future.

jasdeep

Correct your spelling

has deep

Submitted by jasskdhaliwal12 on Sat Sep 02 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

200 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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