Some people believe that children who commit crimes should be punished. Others think that children's parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, the crime rate among people and individuals

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a very rapid pace. A few individuals trust that punish only those pupils who commit crimes.

while

others think that the youngster's family should be punished

instead

. I shall highlight views in the upcoming paragraph and to a meaningful conclusion. To commence with, there are ample

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reasons for

both

views. First and Foremost, drug addiction among pupils and societies is very fast. To simplify, some individuals take drugs at a very young age and after a few years, they don'

t

have money to buy drugs. So, they commit crimes but in these cases youngster's parents are not involved because the parents don'

t

ask to take drugs at a teen age.

Secondly

, after 18 years children should be punished. To justify, if the man is above 18 years old.

Thus

, he thinks about what path is good or what is bad. Even, if they break laws, only he would be punished

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involving their family in

this

process.

For instance

, In India, new inventions like computers and mobile phones are day by day, and the demand for new models is very high. significantly, newborn babies had a bad impact on his life because new technology had many drawbacks, and people used

this

research in a very wrong way. That's why only students are sent to jail not all the members.

On the other hand

, there are

also

some reasons in the favour of

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view. The most prominent one is that

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mother and father don'

t

properly take care of their own child.

Furthermore

, they don'

t

concentrate and can'

t

take strict action or they give the money without knowing what the children use of

this

money.

Moreover

, families support their own babies so, their toddler commits a crime, and

both

younger and genitor sent to prison. To exemplify, In America, Laws published by

both

parents and little ones are the same. So, in

this

country, equal rights are given to

both

adolescents and co-parents.

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According to

my perspective

both

of them have equal punishment because laws are the same for all people.