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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates some changes to the design of the southwest
airport
 and the way it changed over a period of one year.
Overall
, the
southwest
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airport
 experienced significant changes during the period shown. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the expansion of the
airport
area
 and the addition of more shops in the arrivals
area
. In the following year, the
airport
 was expanded from 8 to 18 gates, and people
traveled
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 by electric trains
instead
 of walking. They
also
 decided to build more entrances in the departure and arrivals areas. Following that, coffee shops, ATM machines, and car hire services were added to the left side of the arrivals zone. A bag drop
area
 was constructed on the original site of the check-in zone,
while
 the check-in
area
 was located opposite
to
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it. It is noticeable that the coffee room was moved to the southwest of the
airport
. During the same period, shops were constructed above the security room.
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