The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherel relevant.
The supplied diagram depicts the manufacturing procedure of making
sugar
from sugar
cane
plants.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is really apparent that the process comprises 7 different stages, commencing with growing sugar
canes until they are about a year to 18 months old and concluding with drying and cooling sugar
.
Moving to the details, sugar
cane
is initially
grown in a period of 12-18 months. After over a year of growing, sugar
cane
plants are harvested from the farmland by either human labourers or agricultural machines. The next phase is to crush sugar
cane
into juice. The production continues with purifying the juice from sugar
canes using a limestone filter, which is later heated by an evaporator to become syrup. The next step is
separating sugar
crystals from the syrup by a device called a centrifuge. In the final step, the created crystal is dried and cooled to become the final product that is
necessary for people's daily lives - which is sugar
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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