The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant?
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The line graph illustrates the changing pattern of temperatures monthly in
London
, New York
, and Sydney
. The table demonstrates the total annual hours
of sunshine per year
in the three major cities.
The temperature
in London
is eight in January then
gradually rises and meets the peak at 23 in July and drops back to nine in December year
by year
. Similarly
, every year
, the temperature
in New York
grows from four to 30 from January to July and decreases to five in December. In contrast
, in Sydney
, January is the hottest month of the year
whereas
July is the coldest. However
, the winter days in Sydney
aren’t as cold as in London
and New York
, the average temperature
in Sydney
in July is 16. In addition
, The average number of sunshine hours
in New York
is 2,535 hours
per year
while
Sydney
and London
get 2,473 hours
and 1,180 hours
per year
respectively.
Overall
, it is worth noticing that London
and New York
have similar average monthly temperature
patterns while
Sydney
shares an inverse temperature
pattern. Plus, among the three major cities, New York
has the longest sunshine hours
, followed by Sydney
and London
.Submitted by BeckyJ on
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