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Some people think that the increase use of computers and mobile phone in interactions has negative effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays the great majority of people support
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 and writing skills of
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the young
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 generation,
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 others tend to think that computers are really useful for them.
Although
 the
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 interaction. Let's start by looking at the disadvantages of using electronic books or texts.
Firstly
, a lot of people get distracted when they're working online. When they open e-books they
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receive
 many notifications from different apps,
such
 as Instagram, TikTok and Facebook.
Consequently
, humans open these applications, start to chat with their
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friends
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 some videos.
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 statistics,
due to
 that trend, only 30 per cent of youngsters read books. Unless we can focus on things that matter, our future will start to suffer. Turning to the other side of the argument, our society is no
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 interested in writing skills because of the internet. In
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 many students prefer to use some websites in order to cut down on study time rather than try to understand their mistakes.
For example
, with the creation of sites,
such
 as Chat Gpt or Grammarly, the need to learn how to write disappears.
Moreover
, the study system in many countries allows and
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 the use of electronic devices. So you open Microsoft Word and it changes and corrects your writing errors. Taking everything into consideration, I would say that the
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 use of computers may lead us to deterioration of knowledge and skills in many aspects, so we should try to avoid using them in too large a quantity.
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