The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of 3 metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (task 1)

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of 3 metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (task 1)
The line chart gives information about the change in monthly
prices
for
copper
,
nickel
and
zinc
over the course of 2014.
Overall
, there were declines
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the
prices
of
copper
and especially
nickel
, and a moderate rise
for
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zinc
. By the end of the period, the changes had become less extreme and
nickel
clearly experienced the greatest month-to-month volatility. In January
of
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2014, the percentage change for
nickel
based on the previous month was 6%, by far higher than
copper
(2%) and
zinc
(1%).
This
trend reversed for
nickel
with the percentage changes dropping to 1% by March and a low of -3% by June. The divergences for the other minerals were more moderate with a high of a 3% change for
zinc
in February before a declining trend over the remainder of the first half of the
year
.
Copper
prices
similarly
fell but were grouped slightly lower around 1% to -1%. In the second half of the
year
,
nickel
production declined (-1% over most months) before a sharp rise to finish the
year
with
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.
Copper
,
in contrast
, hovered near 1% from July onwards with a slight uptick in December.
Zinc
was marginally lower with .5% drops for the majority of the latter part of the
year
, prior to a surge to finish with a 2% rise in December, the highest ending point among all mineral
prices
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, nickel, zinc, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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