In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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One of the most dangerous modern problems is
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famine in some countries. Despite the development of new agricultural techniques,
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problem is still widespread.
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, the troubles that cause
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situation can be solved in different ways.
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let us consider the natural factors and ways to avoid disasters that involve them.
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natural is the risk of fire: in some areas,
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as Africa, the climate is extremely hot and farmers always encounter the dryness of wheatfields, forests etc.
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scientists have spent a considerable amount of resources trying to fix it, nowadays the newest fire risk detectors are giving us the opportunity to
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fires and droughts. They are not perfect, and we have to work hard to escape all
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of these techniques. We can
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see the opposite problem; sometimes agricultural facilities are flooded or freeze in humid regions.
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,
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problem can be solved by using greenhouse farming mostly.
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let us take a look at problems that happen because of humanity. It is not a secret that plenty of plants do not care about the ecology and harm our planet by toxic wastes,
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many people throw away environmentally harmful rubbish,
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as an electronic battery.
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, only one electronic battery can poison at least one hundred
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meters of earth.
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why we should make high fines for all who
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the rules that are made for saving agricultural products. We must not allow the irresponsibility of human beings to destroy the natural environment and agricultural facilities as well. In conclusion, food shortages in some parts of the world can be solved by making it a norm to be responsible. And
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devoting more time and money to developing equipment capable of preventing natural cataclysms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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