The chart below indicates the number of people who have heart attacks every year in the US
The bar chart compares the annual proportion of Americans in terms of having
heart
attacks
.
Overall
, the more people age, the more heart
attacks
happen. Moreover
, the number of males was significantly higher than their opposite genders in all given years.
Regarding men, 123 thousand
of them in the period of 29-44 had suffered from heart
disease. Before reaching a peak in the proportion of people who had heart
attacks
at the age of 65 and more, there was a dramatic rise of around 300 thousand
in the period of 45-64, leading them to 424 thousand
. Finally
, with approximately 16 thousand
increase, 440 thousand
men aged 65 and more had heart
attacks
.
Women in the group aged 29-44 that had heart
attacks
were just 3 thousand
. However
, an enormous jump in the period of 45-64 happened and the number reached 136 thousand
. At the age of 65 and more, the number tripled and stopped at 374 thousand
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