The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram gives data about the alterations of West Park Secondary School from its first condition in 1950 to the latest condition in 2010.
Overall
, It is an obvious fact that the playground and the main road were retained while
some buildings were constructed over three various years.
According to
the diagram, in comparison between 1950 and 1980, the most eye-catching change was that houses were taken down to build a car park area and the science block of the school building. Moreover
, in 1980, another striking modification was the sports field that was constructed instead
of farmland next to the playground. In 1980, the main road was
not undergone any process.
Verb problem
had
In addition
, a comparison between 1980 and 2010 years was taken into consideration, the most eye-catching modification was car park area was enlarged while
the sports field was diminished. Furthermore
, the main road, the playground field, the buildings of the school and the science block were retained in 2010 too.Submitted by ismayilovemin530 on
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