the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps illustrate the differences before and after the changing of an industrial
area
located in Norbiton.
This
area
looks quite remote and it is just for the factories. We have about 8 factories including three of them near the crossroad and others lie on the two sides of the road. Besides
that, the farmland on the north side of an industrial area
looks very close to the river, but after changing, this
place looks more busy and lively. Because the authority has built more houses for citizens and they also
opened more activities for people like a playground and school for kids or shops and a medical centre for everyone who needs to meet the requirement. We also
have more roads to move around this
area
like T-junction or some straight streets. The farmland also
separates from the river and now, we have a bridge that helps people to move more easily.
Overall
, we see the progress from the plan that is
very useful for people’s lives and also
improves the quality of their lives.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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