In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree?
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post-graduate
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high
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higher
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.
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education
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students
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government
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government
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, it helps them to have chances to get good jobs in the future and devote Linking Words
to
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education
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